Nner's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A battle by sticks]

Not bad...

It's not bad, but you should have really waited to put sound to it. It's somewhat pointless on putting something that's unfinished because then its not as good as it can be...if that makes sense. Try to wait until you have the finish project, then put it up. It will get reviewed better. But the animation wasn't that bad..so just try to submit complete stuff

[Joe The Dinosaur]

Funny

It was pretty funny...I'd say what got me was the Gertie the Dinosaur music...kudos on using it.

Eddache responds:

Well spotted!

[Rainbow Bar]

Lol

Funny concept...only suggestion maybe draw the rainbow coming out instead of using the image.

bird-man responds:

Ok, thanks.
I'll consider that.

[Green 101]

Its ok

But everything is the same pace For example when he throws the paper, it can be slow when the arm comes up, but as it throws it, make it faster...try to use time charts for pacing. That will make everything look a lot nicer.

[The Present]

Hahaha

That was pretty good. Nice story, artwork was nice..animation was pretty good..couldve used a little more movement, but loved the story.

[DUCK N COW]

Wellll

First off I want to say that there are a lot of things that need work...but the one thing I don't get is your drawing....I was checking out your other drawings and they were really good..but these seem sloppy and rushed..Maybe try using tools other than the brush tool..mess around the the pencil and pen tool. Also, use the type tool for text, it makes it look more professional and not done by a 9 year old.

[Pencilmation #6]

Nice job

Pretty smooth animation...it almost reminds me of a cartoon called Doodlez...you shud check it out if you haven't already. Its nice to see something more creative than the usual crap that is put on the site.

[2009 Show Reel]

Not completely an animation reel..

Not sure if youve looked up what other animation demo reels look like, but this isnt exactly it. One I would take out the photoshop drawing because its not really animation, its just showing your drawing steps. It is fine to have a demo reel with stuff like the photoshop..but not if you're going for the animation..so stick to it only having animation, specially if you're trying to use this for a job or something..

[Space Noodles - Pilot]

Nice artwork

Really nice art work..I really like the style. The animation ok..work a little on the walk cycles and lip sync. I admit I kinda got bored with the story...feels too long and not sure where it was going. But overall this is pretty good compared to some of the stuff that gets good ratings on this site.

cronobreaker responds:

Yeah i'm going to go back and learn some basics before I move onto something new:)

[Postman Tim Door No. 2]

Wooww

Was not expecting the ending.haha First off I want to say nice animation...so much more fluid than what currently is number one *cough cough*. Nice backgrounds too. One critique is to work on hands..they're a little like sausage fingers.lol