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    Funny

    It was pretty funny...I'd say what got me was the Gertie the Dinosaur music...kudos on using it.

    Eddache responds:

    Well spotted!

    Nice artwork

    Really nice art work..I really like the style. The animation ok..work a little on the walk cycles and lip sync. I admit I kinda got bored with the story...feels too long and not sure where it was going. But overall this is pretty good compared to some of the stuff that gets good ratings on this site.

    cronobreaker responds:

    Yeah i'm going to go back and learn some basics before I move onto something new:)

    Work on your pacing..

    It's all at one speed. Try to speed certain things up, like when he falls and such. That will make it look more believable.

    HolyKonni responds:

    OK, i'll try that out next time maybe.

    Be Different

    I guess seeing that you just started with flash that this is what you produce, but try to think out of the box if you're going to do something like that, I mean how many animations like this have you seen. If you're going to go with that type of style then try something more unique than just fighting. Kudos on taking the time to learn flash though. Maybe look at some tutorials.

    Bloodman101 responds:

    Ive looked at tutorials, ive never seen a Line fighting flash before.

    Lol

    Def an ending I wasn't expecting, but it was good.

    Frax responds:

    Thanks.

    Nice

    Its kinda like Animation vs Animator...but it has its own little feel to it.

    gankro responds:

    indeed

    Nice.

    Awesome job. The only thing I would suggest is to maybe have a different font, doesn't seem to fit exactly..but that could just be me. Other than that awesome job:)

    OxSox responds:

    Yeah, you know I kind of agree with you. Font selection is an aspect of life I have very little skill in. When I become a famous animator with a large team of assistants, I will have someone dedicated solely to choosing font for me. Until then you'll have to put up with my half baked choices. Thanks for the review.

    Fun

    It was pretty fun..tho the only annoying this is that I would die, and right as I would get brought back to life...a bomb would hit me...or i'd hit the barrel, and die again...maybe try to make it start at a certain point everytime you die?

    Bertn responds:

    We'll try. :3

    Just me.

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